Thursday, October 22, 2009

Start From Scratch

Traveling the globe to and fro
Building legos with my bro

Lazily floating on the lake
I had a friend, his name was jake

I had many many toys
I played them daily, with my boys

Alpine is my resting place
I know five boys with the name chase

I love many kinds of sports
I also love girls with short shorts:)

Thank you for coming out to play
I really enjoyed your company today!

2 comments:

  1. It seems like you have some cool stuff to say, but a rhyming scheme like that means you have to sacrifice good lines for ones that rhyme. I recommend adding a line after every line in here to make it flow better.

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  2. Ha, ha, ha, the girls with short shorts, gotta love it.

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