Traveling the globe to and fro
Building legos with my bro
Lazily floating on the lake
I had a friend, his name was jake
I had many many toys
I played them daily, with my boys
Alpine is my resting place
I know five boys with the name chase
I love many kinds of sports
I also love girls with short shorts:)
Thank you for coming out to play
I really enjoyed your company today!
Thursday, October 22, 2009
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It seems like you have some cool stuff to say, but a rhyming scheme like that means you have to sacrifice good lines for ones that rhyme. I recommend adding a line after every line in here to make it flow better.
ReplyDeleteHa, ha, ha, the girls with short shorts, gotta love it.
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