john: So... What did you think?
Karl: It was very tight, I loved it.
john: What did you think of the begining?
Karl: Um it was good, didnt you like it?
john: No, no I loved it to.
Karl: Yeah ok... so...
john: So...
Karl: Did mom make you hang out with me cause I have no friends?
john: Um no, of course not, what makes you think that?
Karl: Uh cause I heard her say that before we left.
john: Well that doesnt mean I didnt want to hang out with you anyways...
Karl: Alright man, whatever you say.
john: Well? Why dont you hang out with people?
Karl: I dont know, I do. Why does it matter anyway?
john: It doesnt, I was just wondering dog.
Karl: Haha, whatever... Lets just get home.
john: Alright you said it.
(Karl turns up the music in the car so they dont have to talk anymore)
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Gandolf Greyhem
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your script.
You were able to get us much needed info through dialogue instead of useing a narrator.
Without mentioning mom how would we know they were brothers?
Styke out
I agree with OrangeStyke. And this is hilarious! Keep it up!
ReplyDeletethat was nice and if i was there i would've got him a friend i like how you were straight ;;wit him and you used good names
ReplyDeleteLoved the names... are they twins?
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